Speaking Feedback Date : 2016/04/22 Speaker: Ye Seo Young Evaluator: Dong Gun Lee Title : Hong Kong
1. What strong points does the speaker have? She doesn’t look nervous at all. She is very confident and tries to give information about Hong Kong. 2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject? I was able to know about some famous attractions, such as the longest escalator, HKU, Disney Land, and etc. She also suggests what transportations to take in Hong Kong. 3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation? During her speech, she showed that she has prepared for the speech. However, there were some points where it sounded like an impromptu speech. 4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly? Her voice was clear enough. Also, the speed of her speech made audiences to understand the speech easily. 5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion? She had an opening. She started her speech with the current weather and how spring is coming soon. Also, she had the body where she explained the attractions, transportations, and accommodations in Hong Kong. Lastly, she ended her speech by telling us her opinions about Hong Kong. 6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact. She used her notes and made eye contact with the audiences frequently. 7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech? It would have been nice if she used a visual aid to help the audiences understand better. People who have never been to Hong Kong would want to see some pictures to show how Hong Kong looks like. Also, she used informal languages during her speech as well as sometimes sounded like a impromptu speech. 8. What did you like about the presentation? I really like her calm and relaxing voice. Also, it helped me learn about Hong Kong.
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Speaker: Ye Seo Young
Evaluator: Dong Gun Lee
Title : Hong Kong
1. What strong points does the speaker have?
She doesn’t look nervous at all. She is very confident and tries to give information about Hong Kong.
2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject?
I was able to know about some famous attractions, such as the longest escalator, HKU, Disney Land, and etc. She also suggests what transportations to take in Hong Kong.
3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation?
During her speech, she showed that she has prepared for the speech. However, there were some points where it sounded like an impromptu speech.
4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly?
Her voice was clear enough. Also, the speed of her speech made audiences to understand the speech easily.
5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion?
She had an opening. She started her speech with the current weather and how spring is coming soon. Also, she had the body where she explained the attractions, transportations, and accommodations in Hong Kong. Lastly, she ended her speech by telling us her opinions about Hong Kong.
6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact.
She used her notes and made eye contact with the audiences frequently.
7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech?
It would have been nice if she used a visual aid to help the audiences understand better. People who have never been to Hong Kong would want to see some pictures to show how Hong Kong looks like. Also, she used informal languages during her speech as well as sometimes sounded like a impromptu speech.
8. What did you like about the presentation?
I really like her calm and relaxing voice. Also, it helped me learn about Hong Kong.