I really liked the speed of your speech as well as your tone. The images that were provided through PPT actually helped me to understand your lecture better. Also, I was really impressed by the details you have mentioned regarding specific achievements. Your ending remark, "There are no jumps without takeoffs. No victories without scars. No success without failure", was very touching as well. However, it would have been a bit better if you memorized your speech! Besides that, I thought it was one wonderful speech.
Hello Won Jae I am your classmate Seohee and I love your topic because also I think that Yuna Kim is a great person. Also you ppt was very fancy and I think that the pictures were really conected to your speech so I could listen to your speech with more attention. And your voice tone was great to make a presentation. However you posture looked a little bit rigid, if you fix that it would a perfect presentation. I relly enjoyed you video have a nice day!!
==Self-Critique== 1. As Dong Gun Lee pointed, I should have memorized my speech. In fact, I did memorize all, but thought that giving a speech without looking at a memo would seem somehow unnatural. So I decided to look down sometimes, but became more anxious that I would forget some lines and pause. Then I couldn't take my eyes completely off the memo. This was because I lacked some confidence and enough practices where I stand and ran the slideshow pretending it was a actual situation. 2. I think the speed and tone were adequate, but some faltering and pause make it sound a bit insecure. 3. I am a huge fan of Yuna Kim. I stood too still and could not deliver how much I actually admire and like her. 4. Variety of images were effective and intrigued the audience. 5. Many classmates complemented me on the remark at the ending, which I put emphasis. But it could be more dramatically delivered with my tone or gestures.
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ReplyDeleteDong Gun Lee
ReplyDeleteI really liked the speed of your speech as well as your tone. The images that were provided through PPT actually helped me to understand your lecture better. Also, I was really impressed by the details you have mentioned regarding specific achievements. Your ending remark, "There are no jumps without takeoffs. No victories without scars. No success without failure", was very touching as well. However, it would have been a bit better if you memorized your speech! Besides that, I thought it was one wonderful speech.
Thank you. I did memorize it all, but somehow couldn't help peeking.
DeleteHello Won Jae I am your classmate Seohee and I love your topic because also I think that Yuna Kim is a great person. Also you ppt was very fancy and I think that the pictures were really conected to your speech so I could listen to your speech with more attention. And your voice tone was great to make a presentation. However you posture looked a little bit rigid, if you fix that it would a perfect presentation. I relly enjoyed you video have a nice day!!
ReplyDeleteGlad that you liked my topic and ppt. I agree with you about my being rigid. Thank you for listening to my presentation attentively!
Delete==Self-Critique==
ReplyDelete1. As Dong Gun Lee pointed, I should have memorized my speech. In fact, I did memorize all, but thought that giving a speech without looking at a memo would seem somehow unnatural. So I decided to look down sometimes, but became more anxious that I would forget some lines and pause. Then I couldn't take my eyes completely off the memo.
This was because I lacked some confidence and enough practices where I stand and ran the slideshow pretending it was a actual situation.
2. I think the speed and tone were adequate, but some faltering and pause make it sound a bit insecure.
3. I am a huge fan of Yuna Kim. I stood too still and could not deliver how much I actually admire and like her.
4. Variety of images were effective and intrigued the audience.
5. Many classmates complemented me on the remark at the ending, which I put emphasis. But it could be more dramatically delivered with my tone or gestures.