Monday, April 18, 2016

Euiyeon Kim/ Presentation 1/ Friday 12

3 comments:

  1. Speaking Feedback
    Date : 2016. 4. 20
    Speaker: Euiyeon Kim
    Evaluator: JungMin Lee
    Title : Singapore

    1. What strong points does the speaker have?
    I was impressed with the organization of the presentation. It was really clear. Also her voice, pronunciation, gestures, and visual aids were perfect for the audience to clearly understand what she is talking about.

    2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject?
    I was able to learn briefly about Singapore, its famous places (attractions) and its foods and drinks. With visual aids (pictures on power point), I was able to image what it would be like if I were in Singapore.

    3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation?
    Yes, the contents were adequate. The way she organized her speech was great. It was very clear.

    4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly?
    Yes, her pronunciation and voice was really good. I was able to hear her without any problem.

    5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion?
    Yes. She started off with an interesting hook (opening). Then introduced the orders of main parts of her presentation and presented each parts clearly (body). Lastly, she ended her speech speaking about the thoughts that she has about a trip (conclusion).

    6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact.
    She looked down on her notes quite frequently. I would have been nice if she has made more eye contacts with people.

    7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech?
    Eye contact, definitely would be one of my suggestion. Also, there were some words like Backsuk (백숙) which is a Korean dish that the foreigners might not know. Koreans would definitely would know about this, but if the audiences were from different country, it would be nice if she explain it a little bit.

    8. What did you like about the presentation?
    The way she organized her speech was really nice. It was very clear. Also the visual aids were really nice. Her power points contained huge pictures which allowed the audiences imagine what it would be like to be in Singapore. Lastly, her gestures were really natural.

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  3. Speaking Feedback
    Date : 2016/04/22
    Speaker: Euiyeon Kim
    Evaluator: Dong Gun Lee
    Title : Singapore

    1. What strong points does the speaker have?
    She has clear voice throughout her speech and uses gestures. I also liked the content of her speech, which was very specific, detailed, and not to mention very well organized.
    2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject?
    I was able to know the specific details of Singapore. She gave us information about its famous attractions as well as famous dishes.
    3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation?
    Her courage shows that she adequately prepared for the speech.
    4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly?
    Her voice was clear and loud. It wasn’t too fast nor was it too slow.
    5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion?
    She definitely had an opening, which explained how she was going to present her speech. She also had body with the information she wanted to give us. Lastly, she had a conclusion.
    6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact.
    She used her notes and tried to make eye contact with the audiences.
    7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech?
    Firstly, it would have better if she memorized her speech and made more eye contact with the audiences. Also, I would recommend to write down the names of attractions and dishes in more detail for the audiences to understand better.
    8. What did you like about the presentation?
    I liked the overall structure of the speech. After hearing her speech, Singapore was a country I have dreamed of. In fact, I am planning to visit there during summer vacation. I was really impressed by your speech!

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