I would like to first apologize for laughing too loud. Well, that of course meant that it was indeed a very interesting and unique speech. If I have never been to Osaka, I probably would find a flight ticket to go to Osaka because of USJ and scrumptious dishes you have mentioned during your lecture. Your clear voice caught the audiences' ears. However, I heard too much repetition of 'alright' and 'you know'. It sounded to informal though formality of the speech was not the main issue. Also, it would have been a bit better if you made more eye-contact with the audiences rather than looking back and forth on your speech. However, besides those trivial problems I thought it was a very impressive speech. I would actually like to learn where your confidence and bravery come out from, because stage fright is one thing that I should overcome.
This is your classmate Lee Wonjae. I agree with Dong Gun. I think there were too many 'informal expressions', including OK, guys, all right, you know and etc. And it would've been better if you had taken more care of the ppt, instead of saying "next slide, please." It was a bit distracitng. But I should mention that You spoke clear and seemed to have genuinely enjoyed the trip to Osaka, which made me interested in it and was the important goal of this presentation.
Hello, this is your classmate Kyungmin Park. Even though other two commentators said you used too many informal expressions such as OK and guys. For me, I felt more comfortable when I was listening to your speech and I did not think it was a big deal. Moreover, I liked how you delivered your speech with confidence and also sense of humor. However, it would have been much better if you made more eye contact with the audience. Overall your speech was the most impressive one! Thank you.
Dong Gun Lee
ReplyDeleteI would like to first apologize for laughing too loud. Well, that of course meant that it was indeed a very interesting and unique speech. If I have never been to Osaka, I probably would find a flight ticket to go to Osaka because of USJ and scrumptious dishes you have mentioned during your lecture. Your clear voice caught the audiences' ears. However, I heard too much repetition of 'alright' and 'you know'. It sounded to informal though formality of the speech was not the main issue. Also, it would have been a bit better if you made more eye-contact with the audiences rather than looking back and forth on your speech. However, besides those trivial problems I thought it was a very impressive speech. I would actually like to learn where your confidence and bravery come out from, because stage fright is one thing that I should overcome.
This is your classmate Lee Wonjae. I agree with Dong Gun. I think there were too many 'informal expressions', including OK, guys, all right, you know and etc. And it would've been better if you had taken more care of the ppt, instead of saying "next slide, please." It was a bit distracitng.
ReplyDeleteBut I should mention that You spoke clear and seemed to have genuinely enjoyed the trip to Osaka, which made me interested in it and was the important goal of this presentation.
Hello, this is your classmate Kyungmin Park. Even though other two commentators said you used too many informal expressions such as OK and guys. For me, I felt more comfortable when I was listening to your speech and I did not think it was a big deal. Moreover, I liked how you delivered your speech with confidence and also sense of humor. However, it would have been much better if you made more eye contact with the audience. Overall your speech was the most impressive one! Thank you.
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