Friday, April 15, 2016

Seohee Park / Assignment1 / Present in English Fri 12

2 comments:

  1. Dong Gun Lee

    I really liked your calm and relaxing voice while you were delivering a speech to us. I never had a chance to visit Australia however, after watching your speech I was and I am determined to go to Australia before graduating. Specific details regarding tourist attractions and accommodations as well as your length of the speech was really nice. However, it would have been better if you used more images to show the tourist attractions. It was an interesting speech to listen to!

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  2. Matthew Sung

    Hello. This is one of your classmates, Matthew Sung. The following are my comments with regard to your presentation.

    (a) I quite like the way you began your speech, asking a question to the audience, since I was afraid of traveling by myself. It sort of caught my attention.
    (b) I also like that you briefly mention the outline of your speech before going on to details because then I could expect what to come next.
    (c) After watching your video, I now personally want to go to Taronga Zoo where I can closely see animals such as Koala & kangaroo since I never had chance to see them.

    All in all, thank you so much for your informative speech.

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