Friday, June 3, 2016

Wonjae LEE/Fri.12/Assignment2

https://youtu.be/Ep327rt_Mn8

2 comments:

  1. Speaking Feedback
    Date : 2016/06/10
    Speaker: Wonjae Lee
    Evaluator: Seo Hee Park
    Title : How to defend our air space

    1. What strong points does the speaker have?
    One of the strong points is that you seem that you have a strong knowledge about this topic therefore I could see on you lots of efforts and confidence on developing your presentation.

    2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject?
    This topic was actually really fresh for me and for most of the audiences however you explained in detailed with maps and pictures therefore finally we could have a well understanding of your speech.

    3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation?
    Yes, you’ve prepared enough information and photographs for the audience and also you to explained the pictures and maps with detail so the presentation seemed well prepared.

    4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly?
    Your voice tone was high enough that the audience could hear you however you’ve made some pauses during the speech which made your speech sound less fluently.

    5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion?
    Definitely, it has all stages opening, body, and conclusion therefore I could clearly understand your presentation step by step so it was well organized.

    6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact.
    You’ve did a clear eye contact with all the audience and you looked confident about what you were delivering. And you saw the notes a little bit when explaining however your explanation was really good even it was a difficult topic.

    7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech?
    May be if you can reduce more you pauses during the speech it could sound more natural and more fluent.

    8. What did you like about the presentation?
    I liked the freshness of the topic because I would never be able to develop a speech about how to defend our air space so the topic itself caught my attention and also the confidence that he showed when explaining his subject.

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  2. Speaking Feedback
    Date : June 10th 2016
    Speaker: Wonjae Lee
    Evaluator: Shinhee Kim
    Title : How to defend our air space

    1. What strong points does the speaker have?
    It seems that the speaker prepared a lot of information and the visual aids really helped to understand the content.

    2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject?
    For me, it was quite complicated to understand but it was fresh and interesting.

    3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation?
    I could see that the speaker prepared a lot. Enough photos and explanation of concpets were given.

    4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly?
    The voice volume was perfect but the speed went up a few times so that I missed some points.

    5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion?
    Yes, the speech was well organized. I could notice there were definitely three parts; opening, body and conclusion.

    6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact.
    There were enough eye contacts with the audience and the speaker rarely checked his script.

    7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech?
    It would have been better if the speaker had slowed down the speed and used some stress when he explained the concepts.

    8. What did you like about the presentation?
    I liked the topic since it was not familiar with me. The powerpoint was helpful to follow his speech.

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