Speaking Feedback Date : 2016-06-04 Speaker: Seohee Park Evaluator: Byungchan Park Title : Wrong Use of The Social Media
1. What strong points does the speaker have? Her topic was interesting that 90% of people didn’t feel good after watching other post. And she used many different ways to show the results (diagrams and charts). Her message was clear and it was supported by many evidence.
2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject? Her survey was explained and the result was clear enough to understand. She quoted expert’s opinion and it well supports her argument. Her presentation has a simple structure which is a compliment.
3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation? Yes. She conducted a survey and analyzed it well. She also looked up expert’s opinion on the social media to support her argument. Image about a woman taking a selfie on a beach was impressive.
4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly? Voice is not loud enough. Perhaps it's because of surrounding sounds. She was consistent most of the time.
5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion? She started off her speech by asking a relevant question to the audience. And then, she explained the survey result and other supporting ideas such as expert’s opinion. She ended her speech with her understanding of the topic and suggestion. So, yes she does have a definite opening, body, and conclusion.
6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact. She did get help from the notes. And yet, she makes eye contact with audiences most of the time.
7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech? Overall, I can see that she'd put efforts in her presentation. But her survey could've been more reliable if she had more respondents. Moreover, memorizing her script will make her presentation more fluent and natural.
8. What did you like about the presentation? The topic is interesting. She has a consistent tone of voice which makes her presentation more professional and easy to understand. The result of the last question, expert’s opinion and use of picture (a woman taking a selfie on a beach) were impressive. It helped me understand the argument more clearly.
Speaking feedback Date: June 6th, 2016 Speaker: Seohee Park Evaluator: Kyungmin Park
1. What strong points does the speakers have? She used her fresh perspective in looking at the social media. I have never know those details before I listened to her speech. Moreover, she kept vey calm throughout her speech and her message was clear.
2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject? Her survey was well explained by using different types of charts. Especially, the pie chart helped me a lot to understand about the subject. She also used appropriate images to help the understanding of audience.
3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation? Yes. It looked like she put a lot of efforts in conducting a survey. She had appropriate respondents and questions for the survey.
4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly? Yes, she spoke in clear tone. However, her voice was not loud enough and she sounded less confident.
5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body and conclusion? Yes, her speech was well organized with an opening, body and conclusion. Her conclusion was impressive, because she tried to give audience a suggestion about how to use the social media wisely.
6. Please comment on the speaker's use of notes/eye contact. She constantly looked at her note pads and it was distracting for me to concentrate on the speech. However, she made eye contact with the audience most of the time.
7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech? It would have been much better, if she had more emphasis and pause in her speech. Also relying less on the script would make her sound more professional.
8. What did you like about the presentation? First of all, I liked her staying calm throughout the speech. She talked in right speed and did not rush. Moreover, she did not only explain about the result of the survey, but also made a suggestion to the audience. This made me to ponder the subject for a while. 2. How well did the
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ReplyDeleteDate : 2016-06-04
Speaker: Seohee Park
Evaluator: Byungchan Park
Title : Wrong Use of The Social Media
1. What strong points does the speaker have?
Her topic was interesting that 90% of people didn’t feel good after watching other post. And she used many different ways to show the results (diagrams and charts). Her message was clear and it was supported by many evidence.
2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject?
Her survey was explained and the result was clear enough to understand. She quoted expert’s opinion and it well supports her argument. Her presentation has a simple structure which is a compliment.
3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation?
Yes. She conducted a survey and analyzed it well. She also looked up expert’s opinion on the social media to support her argument. Image about a woman taking a selfie on a beach was impressive.
4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly?
Voice is not loud enough. Perhaps it's because of surrounding sounds. She was consistent most of the time.
5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion?
She started off her speech by asking a relevant question to the audience. And then, she explained the survey result and other supporting ideas such as expert’s opinion. She ended her speech with her understanding of the topic and suggestion. So, yes she does have a definite opening, body, and conclusion.
6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact.
She did get help from the notes. And yet, she makes eye contact with audiences most of the time.
7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech?
Overall, I can see that she'd put efforts in her presentation. But her survey could've been more reliable if she had more respondents. Moreover, memorizing her script will make her presentation more fluent and natural.
8. What did you like about the presentation?
The topic is interesting. She has a consistent tone of voice which makes her presentation more professional and easy to understand. The result of the last question, expert’s opinion and use of picture (a woman taking a selfie on a beach) were impressive. It helped me understand the argument more clearly.
Speaking feedback
ReplyDeleteDate: June 6th, 2016
Speaker: Seohee Park
Evaluator: Kyungmin Park
1. What strong points does the speakers have?
She used her fresh perspective in looking at the social media. I have never know those details before I listened to her speech.
Moreover, she kept vey calm throughout her speech and her message was clear.
2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject?
Her survey was well explained by using different types of charts. Especially, the pie chart helped me a lot to understand about the subject. She also used appropriate images to help the understanding of audience.
3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation?
Yes. It looked like she put a lot of efforts in conducting a survey. She had appropriate respondents and questions for the survey.
4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly?
Yes, she spoke in clear tone. However, her voice was not loud enough and she sounded less confident.
5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body and conclusion?
Yes, her speech was well organized with an opening, body and conclusion. Her conclusion was impressive, because she tried to give audience a suggestion about how to use the social media wisely.
6. Please comment on the speaker's use of notes/eye contact.
She constantly looked at her note pads and it was distracting for me to concentrate on the speech. However, she made eye contact with the audience most of the time.
7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech?
It would have been much better, if she had more emphasis and pause in her speech. Also relying less on the script would make her sound more professional.
8. What did you like about the presentation?
First of all, I liked her staying calm throughout the speech. She talked in right speed and did not rush. Moreover, she did not only explain about the result of the survey, but also made a suggestion to the audience. This made me to ponder the subject for a while.
2. How well did the