Speaking Feedback Date : 2016/06/05 Speaker: Shinhee Kim Evaluator: Dong Gun Lee Title : College Students’ Job Seeking
1. What strong points does the speaker have? . She first has a very confidence voice. I don’t really see her being nervous on stage. Also, she first started off with her speech by expressing sympathy and I as a audience felt sympathy towards students having a very hard time getting a job. I think it is a strong point that I would also have learned through watching the speech.
2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject? There were some results that were surprising. Also, I had an opportunity to know of what other students think that is related to jobs.
3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation? Yes. She conducted a survey before the speech. She also had a speech to deliver.
4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly? Her voice was loud and clear.
5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion? She first started off with her speech by asking a question to the audience. Also, she had the survey results as body of her speech. Lastly, she had a conclusion to wrap up her speech.
6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact. She made eye contacts with the audience. However, she kept on looking at her ppt slides while she was talking. It would have been better if she made more eye contacts with the audience.
7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech? I thought the conclusion was too short. It would have been better to talk more about the implications of the survey results.
8. What did you like about the presentation? Her speech was very easy to understand and listen to. I thought it was informative and delivered adequate information.
Speaking Feedback Date : 2016/06/06 Speaker: Shinhee Kim Evaluator: Kyungmin Park Title : College Students’ Job Seeking
1. What strong points does the speaker have? . She speaks in clear tone with smooth pronunciation. She looked very confident and passionate while speaking. She constantly made eye contact with audience.
2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject? It was easy to understand, since the topic was familiar. She explained about the result of the survey with her own words.
3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation? Yes. She had a nice visual aid and I could really find out that she put a lot of efforts in conducting a survey.
4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly? Her voice was loud and clear. However, it would have been better if she did not rush throughout the speech.
5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion?
Yes, it definitely had clear introduction, body and conclusion. She especially asked couple of questions in the introduction to gain attention from audience.
6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact. She made eye contacts with the audience and did not rely on her note pads. However, she kept on looking at her ppt slides while she was talking and it was somewhat distracting.
7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech? It would have been much better if she could have a fresh perspective on the result. She did a pretty good job in explaning the result of the survey, but it wasn't creative enough.
8. What did you like about the presentation? I liked her topic, because I could really relate myself to the speech. Moreover, she looked calm and confident while speeking.
Speaking Feedback
ReplyDeleteDate : 2016/06/05
Speaker: Shinhee Kim
Evaluator: Dong Gun Lee
Title : College Students’ Job Seeking
1. What strong points does the speaker have? .
She first has a very confidence voice. I don’t really see her being nervous on stage. Also, she first started off with her speech by expressing sympathy and I as a audience felt sympathy towards students having a very hard time getting a job. I think it is a strong point that I would also have learned through watching the speech.
2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject?
There were some results that were surprising. Also, I had an opportunity to know of what other students think that is related to jobs.
3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation?
Yes. She conducted a survey before the speech. She also had a speech to deliver.
4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly?
Her voice was loud and clear.
5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion?
She first started off with her speech by asking a question to the audience. Also, she had the survey results as body of her speech. Lastly, she had a conclusion to wrap up her speech.
6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact.
She made eye contacts with the audience. However, she kept on looking at her ppt slides while she was talking. It would have been better if she made more eye contacts with the audience.
7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech?
I thought the conclusion was too short. It would have been better to talk more about the implications of the survey results.
8. What did you like about the presentation?
Her speech was very easy to understand and listen to. I thought it was informative and delivered adequate information.
Speaking Feedback
ReplyDeleteDate : 2016/06/06
Speaker: Shinhee Kim
Evaluator: Kyungmin Park
Title : College Students’ Job Seeking
1. What strong points does the speaker have? .
She speaks in clear tone with smooth pronunciation.
She looked very confident and passionate while speaking.
She constantly made eye contact with audience.
2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject?
It was easy to understand, since the topic was familiar.
She explained about the result of the survey with her own words.
3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation?
Yes. She had a nice visual aid and I could really find out that she put a lot of efforts in conducting a survey.
4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly?
Her voice was loud and clear. However, it would have been better if she did not rush throughout the speech.
5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion?
Yes, it definitely had clear introduction, body and conclusion. She especially asked couple of questions in the introduction to gain attention from audience.
6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact.
She made eye contacts with the audience and did not rely on her note pads. However, she kept on looking at her ppt slides while she was talking and it was somewhat distracting.
7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech?
It would have been much better if she could have a fresh perspective on the result. She did a pretty good job in explaning the result of the survey, but it wasn't creative enough.
8. What did you like about the presentation?
I liked her topic, because I could really relate myself to the speech. Moreover, she looked calm and confident while speeking.